- good however it was explained to be explicit and believe the target audience should be 18 and up instead of 15
- a bit too vague the plot isn't so interesting
- great storyboard and moodboard detailed character profile however doesn't seem very realistic
- the whole story line is given away in the teaser trailer from seeing the storyboard
- explanation was very confusing overall nice presentation and great planning however need to make things a bit clearer